This Poem was Submitted By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2014-06-08 10:52:17 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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King-Dumb Come

Those who tend to hold a grudge claim a life position as a judge. It’s held so tight they can’t let go; presuming that others are just living bothers. What they can’t realize is that they are only common men who have chosen to hold themselves higher with everything they do. No, not ever could they begin to recognize you.

Copyright © June 2014 DeniMari Z.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2014-07-05 10:03:13
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Deni, I think it would be interesting to read the back story to this piece. It is rife with between the lines, in your face, anti-amorphisms. Of judgment- maybe others are better suited to compare albums. I know- I do well enough to judge myself. Thank you for sharing.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2014-06-12 23:52:58
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
OMG That is so beautiful I think I might cry. You so get the plight of Christ. He wants all to know him not just some. But money blinds the many and a lack of money frees the few.
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