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Cowboy Sonnet She strode into the Cowboy Bar that night Her body language made her purpose clear She’d find the man who made her heart take flight She’d call him out and show no outward fear She found him drawn and withered at the bar Just nothing like the man she thought she’d known How could her dreams have fallen off this far? Or was it just from being left alone She watched him for what seemed the longest while Then turned and headed slowly for the door But then a handsome man with winsome smile Was guiding her around that hardwood floor The little band played songs from way-back-when The lady felt her heart take flight again |
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2014-10-03 13:54:16
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Nicely written with great rhyming - Clear and concise to the reader the message of someone who has gone off track - My only question would be - Did the man at the bar light up when he saw her and not let her leave?
Love & heartache - hand in hand -
Good poem,
blessings
Deni