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Own Your Happiness Come gather ‘round let’s just do this it’s the gracious from above along with sparkle speaking love me and you anyone or who can clap their hands do a dance it’s happy full of life sending out rhythm and vibes so hold on to that light make it move or make it stay It’s a time for feeling good about this life wrong or right It’s come around now is the time to gather ‘round hear the sounds feel our beating hearts that pound so we can catch in flight a little peace from a dove We’ve been wishing for more fun seems there’s never time to have enough |
Additional Notes:
Very different style from me - trying to change up a bit -
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2015-03-24 07:35:39
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Good morning my friend. This is truly an up-beat piece...full of light and brightness. I did stumble a bit with L2 of your first stanza; "it’s the [gracious or graciousness?] from above" though I enjoyed the ease with which your words flowed, your style most interesting and yes it is different for you... :) Best always, L.