This Poem was Submitted By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2015-03-11 01:18:12 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Own Your Happiness

Come gather ‘round let’s just do this it’s the gracious from above along with sparkle speaking love  me and you  anyone or who  can clap their hands  do a dance it’s happy  full of life  sending out  rhythm and vibes so hold on to that light make it move or make it stay It’s a time for feeling good about this life wrong or right It’s come around  now is the time to gather ‘round  hear the sounds feel our beating hearts that pound so we can catch in flight    a little peace from a dove We’ve been wishing for more fun seems there’s never time to have enough

Copyright © March 2015 DeniMari Z.

Additional Notes:
Very different style from me - trying to change up a bit -


This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2015-03-24 07:35:39
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Good morning my friend. This is truly an up-beat piece...full of light and brightness. I did stumble a bit with L2 of your first stanza; "it’s the [gracious or graciousness?] from above" though I enjoyed the ease with which your words flowed, your style most interesting and yes it is different for you... :) Best always, L.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2015-03-14 13:28:52
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
I like the new style and this poem a song sound. It would be easy to put to music. light and uplifting
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