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Petals Thoughts of you blow like cool breezes across the deserts of my mind Your touch is like lit matches to the dried out roses of my heart I can feel the hunger that lingers in your hugs Love how your eyes thinly hides the fire that abides in your soul Words are poor substitutes for action But for now I only have nouns verbs,and metaphors to leave like literary petals at your cyber door |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2015-07-24 00:20:32
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
I love the imagery. The words show so much understanding of the "hunger" being felt the beloved. Clearly there is a parched desert in the poet's heart as well and it makes me wonder why there is no action. :)
Love how your eyes thinly "hide"
the fire that abides in
your soul?