This Poem was Submitted By: James C. Horak On Date: 2015-07-19 07:06:27 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Stealing words everyday    Websters growing thinner Thought I'd compensate      and make some new ones Nothing there like simpatico     to meet together in place                  and time Sharing in a joy of momentary                        touch So electric we assonate

Copyright © July 2015 James C. Horak

This Poem was Critiqued By: kevin Dunn On Date: 2015-08-07 17:11:54
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Ha! yes I had to look it up and I'd say that Part of the magic of your poetry is your ability to have your words assonate in the most propitious places. Short but really did the job,causing the reader to think. Nothing to comment on in the writing. Haven't been here in a few years, but good to be back. Kevin.

This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2015-07-24 18:38:49
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Ah, so well done as always James. You have such a way with words, their bending, blending and twisting and then you go and start smithing...excellent. You've definitely added some life and color to the fore. Most enjoyable...Lora
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2015-07-24 00:33:17
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
This poem makes me smile. I feel that way when I come to the poetic link many times.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2015-07-20 10:16:45
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
I love it. Esp the dictionary getting thin part. Well done. The images a crisp as crisp can be.
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