This Poem was Submitted By: James C. Horak On Date: 2015-08-13 06:09:05 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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We Have Moments

The calm in the eye of a storm    a chubby little newcomer being born Synchronicity playing with our lives    denial that only momentarily belies  What we see between so many veils    for which memory quickly loses details Are we really here or a torn residue           from somewhere else

Copyright © August 2015 James C. Horak

This Poem was Critiqued By: kevin Dunn On Date: 2015-08-15 10:41:27
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.50000
Very good question, leaves the reader thinking. Kevin.

This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2015-08-14 11:15:24
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
LOve it. Esp. lines 5 & 6.The ending lines made me think of String Theroy. What if, indeed. Thanks again for a thought provoking poem.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. On Date: 2015-08-14 00:20:53
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Succinct but complete, as my review. I love brevity when it is well done. Well done. Thanks for the post and the read. Medard
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