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You Your lips speaks volumes without ever moving A quiet poetry love without words Your eyes brim the surface of your soul While air delights in playing in your hair If stars ever had eyes they would see a kindred light Then the moon would become a sun of a mid night noon Each dawn is the very definition of hope a signature of new Every time you smile The sky finds a newer shade of blue |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. On Date: 2015-08-27 23:43:30
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.90000
Absolutely beautiful. Especially love the last stanza. I wish that I wasn't so far lost that I could still write or even feel such emotions that you so exquisitely expressed in this poetry. Nothing to add.
As always,
only unconditional respect,
Mark