This Poem was Submitted By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2015-08-19 22:26:04 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Your lips speaks volumes without ever moving A quiet poetry  love without words Your eyes brim the  surface of your soul While air delights in  playing in your hair If stars ever had eyes they would see a kindred light Then the moon would become a sun of a mid night noon Each dawn is the very definition of hope a signature of new Every time you smile The sky finds a  newer shade of blue  

Copyright © August 2015 Joe Gustin


This Poem was Critiqued By: Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. On Date: 2015-08-27 23:43:30
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.90000
Absolutely beautiful. Especially love the last stanza. I wish that I wasn't so far lost that I could still write or even feel such emotions that you so exquisitely expressed in this poetry. Nothing to add. As always, only unconditional respect, Mark


This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2015-08-25 08:52:00
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.75000
Every time you smile, the sky finds a newer shade of blue.. So delicate and meaningful. Nothing more to say.
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