This Poem was Submitted By: James C. Horak On Date: 2015-08-20 10:56:39 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Do We Not Ponder

When divorced are we so well    that our lines do not tell “tygers tygers burning bright”  “at the second turning of the stair”  Is not to be found somewhere in there When sublime by dawn beaming light    can we be certain that we are ever right Our work does not better attach to another    whether mother, sister, brother, author Tangled always, lovingly embracing                                 the weave

Copyright © August 2015 James C. Horak

This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2015-09-06 19:53:34
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Absolutely beautiful - I honestly have nothing to add to this poetic piece - It flows naturally in with the scheme of content and I salute your talent - on my list - Deni

This Poem was Critiqued By: Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. On Date: 2015-08-27 23:26:45
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.90000
Nice post with a touch of Blake's Songs of Experience. I always appreciate pure economy to express the poem's essence versus the verbosity that I usually need. Thanks for the read. My best, Medard
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2015-08-22 11:07:13
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.90909
Interesting structure and flow to this poem. I like S1 L3 & 4 as well as, mother sister, brother author.
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