This Poem was Submitted By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2015-09-19 11:36:24 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Love Waits

Love waits reading a newspaper tapping her foot to the rhythm of a song not yet shared Love drinks a glass of wine as delicate as her soul Time sits beside her like a low maintenance friend Chatting words unheard Loving in the silence

Copyright © September 2015 Joe Gustin


This Poem was Critiqued By: Wanda S. Thibodeaux On Date: 2015-10-08 21:41:27
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Joe: Don't know what it is about this little brevity that calls to me but it does. Love appears to be a subtle allusion here: "Love waits/reading a newspaper/Love drinks a glass of wine/Loving in the silence." Guess I can't explain it, but I really like it. Lovely imagery! Thank you!


This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2015-10-01 23:00:27
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
There is an honesty about this poem that I cannot express. So simple. The depth you see in little things is so rare. The moment you describe in the third passage is not unfamiliar to me. Keep writing! :)
This Poem was Critiqued By: Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. On Date: 2015-09-24 21:53:18
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Very nice. Your poetry paints beautiful images for me (and a kinda vice versa). I feel welcomed in your poetic vision. Thanks for the post and the visit. Please keep reminding me of the beautiful and special things/moments. Thanks! Mark
This Poem was Critiqued By: kevin Dunn On Date: 2015-09-22 03:53:37
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
What a lovely gentle piece. The reader can immagine the girl or woman in the poem. Great work. Thanks for the read. Kevin.
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