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Give GOD The Glory
Hey check this folks 'cause this I need to say, you see every since I can remember I've been having things my way. So maybe I've been Blessed from the beginning because every since I was a kid I've been winning. I wasn't really thinking about that 'cause I was too busy pattin myself on the back. I thought I was as good as they come and I wouldn't be out done by any one. All you had to do was look and you would see , the way I boast you know I'm all about me. Like going through life making castles out of sand, whatever the weather they would stand 'cause I could work miracles with my hands. Even through the worst of storms with gale force winds, I wouldn't bip, bop or even bind. Through the darkest of nights or if the day was sunny, it made no deference I still made all money. While every day I was with a different girl because in my mind this was my world. Hey I was doing things that people could only dream but instead of shining bright, all I had was a gleam. I had accomplished all my goals, still inside me was a big hole. And that big hole I was unable to fill, I tried wine, women and even pills, still, that big hole I couldn't seal. So I looked to the sky and asked, Lord, why? But nothing I heard, not a peep not a word. While being stuck in my fixation, I had a real revelation. How do you think all this came to be? The sky, the Earth or even the tree, the beasts of the fields, the fish of the sea? How do you think man came to be? Then I started to wonder, where can I look? I heard, The Bible is a great place to start but first you must open your heart. So I opened The Bible and looked it over, I found He's almighty GOD and His name is JEHOVAH. I also found, with God none of us could win because every since Adam, we were all born into sin. So God sent his son, who died for us all, His name is JESUS and without Him we would all fall. And if you open your heart and let The Lord in, He will guide you to all righteousness and exalt you among men. Now the hole has been filled, I can now hold my head up and I can chill. You see I found, it's alright to do your do my friend but without The Lord you're just chasing the wind, and it's alright to tell your story, But You Got To Give GOD The GLORY.
This poem is also on other web sites, the same sites as the first poem. These poems started to come to me in Rehab. Given to me for all to see. When they come in sight, I Write.
This Poem was Critiqued By: charles r pitts On Date: 2015-10-25 00:58:12
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Amen brother! Preach on! Nothing I can say here that I haven't already said about your other pieces. Give it some structure brother---some form to keep it warm. Your lines are disconnected and the meaning's been affected. God put this world and everything in it in its own specific order--use your flavor and return the favor...peace!
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