This Poem was Submitted By: Wanda S. Thibodeaux On Date: 2015-10-31 15:29:52 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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words rush

from behind the eyes of life words rush leaving night's repose for morning's blush they tumble down like building blocks drift in place like angel dust and telling sets the language free a poem has found its chance to be

Copyright © October 2015 Wanda S. Thibodeaux

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Previously published on the Allpoetry website.

This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2015-11-04 13:04:27
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Wanda, o’ for extolling creation. The grabbing for fairys or the inhalation of that morning’s blush- This I think is manifest for the cheery, or lovingly done creative work. I think it is incumbent on you to writer her sister/brother piece, the dark, clawing creation- at least for me; it has been a thing! Great work Wanda.

This Poem was Critiqued By: charles r pitts On Date: 2015-11-01 23:23:03
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 8.71429
from behind the eyes of life words rush leaving night's repose for morning's blush they tumble down like building blocks drift in place like angel dust and telling sets the language free a poem has found its chance to be ahhh--this one i found quite delish! "from behind the eyes of life"--love this line because it's so meaty--something more than it seems--deeper than at first glance--beyond the surface appearance--seeing the extra dimension...or simply putting the same pieces together in a new and different way. poetry can indeed take on a life of its own--as this poem has. this is definitely a unique piece!
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2015-11-01 07:24:58
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
What can I say but WOW. That is a masterful bit of writting. I esp loveL5, L6 & L7. Just a gorgeous poem from head to toe. From stem to stern.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2015-11-01 02:35:29
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.00000
Wanda I truly enjoyed this brief but well stated little poem. It says just exactly what needs to be said in such an easy flowing style that puts a smile on this readers face, well done. Lora
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