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In A War Of Flowers In a war of flowers let us move from the Poppy to the Iris The Poppy a symbol of sacrifice To the Iris in the defence of freedom Let us wear this to help lady liberty hold her torch higher then hatred can reach Paris proves we are in it now Lets wear the Iris To show the French Of them we are proud |
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2015-11-18 19:03:33
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
I agree; and love the way you painted these particular flowers -
Too many are dying for a cause they have no burden to bear -
This world has changed for the worst - I pray for a better outcome than we have now.
simply beautiful,
Deni