This Poem was Submitted By: Wanda S. Thibodeaux On Date: 2015-11-18 12:29:05 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
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haiku 31 cafe'du monde
beignets and cafe'au lait
powdered sugar kisses |
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Copyright © November 2015 Wanda S. Thibodeaux
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2015-11-26 21:56:57
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.85714
Is this spy code as to where I might meet you in some near future. Please say it is so. A invite by a poet it girl. P S there are no better bragging rights
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2015-11-24 19:31:22
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Name the place and time and I'll be there -
Actually this is a beautiful picture of what a quaint moment would bring -
Love how you ended it with powdered sugar kisses as it ends with love -
Very nicely done,
Deni
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2015-11-20 02:08:03
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Simple words to describe a perfect evening..
I read up a little bit to understand haiku structures after you told me they aren't meant to have a title. Looks like they have very specific rules about how many syllables fall on each line, etc. Since this is haiku 31, I went to your poem list to read the other 30.. where are they?
Look forward to reading more!
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