This Poem was Submitted By: Wanda S. Thibodeaux On Date: 2015-11-18 12:33:38 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
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haiku 32 man in the moon sings
to midnight sky
stars giggle |
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Copyright © November 2015 Wanda S. Thibodeaux
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2015-11-26 21:54:55
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.85714
While the sun laughs and the stars grin. Wanda you never cease to amaze me
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2015-11-24 19:32:55
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Love this Wanda -this would actually be a great start to a children's story -
You are well skilled with Haiku - a talent I lack -
very nice poem,
blessings,
Deni
This Poem was Critiqued By: kevin Dunn On Date: 2015-11-20 13:37:45
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Absolutely love it. nothing more to say.Kevin.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2015-11-19 06:35:27
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Very nice.. I giggled myself.. few words to paint a lovely picture of a blue and white night. You could have perhaps had a more intriguing title to this verse?
Keep writing!
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