This Poem was Submitted By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2016-01-14 12:54:20 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Perhaps We'll Be Back

Each millisecond  in each turn our Universe moves in divine ways a single being microscopic dot under majestic power Inconceivable yet so real that we exist fascinated yet captured  with life, an anatomy mirrored to miracles Minds of brilliance complexities opposite of animals which share the same space as us Capacity enough to be born within such an extensive exceptional world embraced by the unseen yet most powerful truth  Undeniable unbelievable to fathom  how small we really are Where the most importance of life is to do it without question never doubting for a moment  This reality is a reality which no genius or fellow man Can precisely say the words we need to hear  to believe and understand The exit still a mystery from all ages and alike  could bring a universal closure or just allow the spirit to be joyful to continue on in flight. 

Copyright © January 2016 DeniMari Z.

This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2016-01-23 10:21:27
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
A very thought provoking poem. So many questions about a mystery that is life. Each stanza begs the birth of more poems."an anatomy mirrored to miracles" is one of my fav. lines. By the end of my reading of your work I wonder what life might be like if we knew for sure the outcome of our souls. All and all a wonderful inspired poem.

This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2016-01-22 09:47:45
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Deni, such common themes in the heart of one who spends their time on spirituality and the content of the universe. You capsulated the entire discussion very well, ensuring the comparative, diminutive size of the observer, yet the observers powerful, expansive spirit, to the diminutive particles of the immense universe, and the grandness thereby. Time as a tiny marker is inserted, yet also time as the ever-present sentinel is also apportioned. Of the importance of life, you extract it from all the above by allowing it to conjoin with all of the above. I am not sure whether this resides, for me, the reader, as more of a human spirit piece, or whether, allowing for the quantum make up all that is, it is symbiotic and nothing more. Well done
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