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For Me For me the stars are the ultimate night light That banish the demons of my regrets, the frets of my debts. Of the i o u's I owe only to you I wish the earth could spin in a way that I could understand Allowing the clouds to talk to me as if in some fluffy Morris code The bee could mark time in sync with the humming bird With the surrendering of the sun and the rise of flowers facing up Spring brings the hope of new Summer know the length of a shadow's hue Autumn is the only time the year realizes that it is mortal And winter seals the bet In all of this you are sleeping in my chair |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2016-03-30 15:30:18
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Joe,
You always had a nice lyricism to everything you write. It's odd. When I read you its as if I'm reading lines from a genius that have to be translated into another language before being read, and some of the lines get garbled coming through - but some retain the original genius.
Mark