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Second Chance It's a trip down a never ending memory lane recalling all sorts of confusing pain felt it within so long long ago then it just stopped kind of tough to recall believing I should honestly know It left with him then came back how the hell did I go off track guess I fell in love again this time much too fast God I hate reliving the part that I left back in my past - |
Additional Notes:
Punctuation left out - Re-write of one of the very first poems I submitted to TPL -
All comments appreciated -
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2016-03-30 15:31:45
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Deni,
The short lines suit you. I would explore this vein some more.
Mark