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Erte’s Abstraction Erte’ women in slinky black mauve scarves ‘cross porcelain throats femmes adorn pinstriped arms of Valentino men white linen cloths tabled by jasmine scented water bowls host gilded ringed napkins whose elegant luster pales to hydrangeas mingled amidst swooning ferns ported crystalline goblets punctuate sumptuous entrees quiche lays in attendance to coral shelled crab legs scattered on spinach beds held by silver charger caddies Captain Black clouds swirl Chanel scents Moonlight Serenade whispers softly to lit candles flickering flicker, flick, illusion’s dance begins |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2016-04-19 12:48:07
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Wow. Very excellent construction. Like a poetic snowflake made completely of memories. The images are just that delicately written. As your reader I felt so invited,guided to be part of the dance. All in all an beautiful write.