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Love Waits Love waits reading a newspaper tapping her foot to the rhythm of a song not yet shared Love drinks a glass of wine as delicate as her soul Time sits beside her like a low maintenance friend Chatting words unheard Loving in the silence |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2016-07-15 16:51:11
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Joe, I am going to take a different tact from the last time you presented us with this splendid piece. It is a “next to the bed” read again content!
The piece is as if the term light year is being defined, and inverted. Sure there is the interval, the “wait”, and then there is the measure, “time”. One takes a direct interest, almost as if time/motion of mass, are caught together in the cycle, or light year actually being a measure of distance, not of “year” or time.
You grant me the patience and the impatience all in the same speak. A very nice piece to lose myself in.