This Poem was Submitted By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2016-08-30 15:38:13 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Night's Magic

Have you ever— hidden in shadows to weave among oaks  and willows, who bow and sway with  summer’s first breeze as night’s silvery  sun kisses your dreams allowing you to  pirouette sky-clad, tasting sweet  passions whim while silently bound to one  that watches spirit’s impromptu dance, mesmerized at a glimpsed moment caught  by celestial’s random chance Now, does night’s magic linger or fade with first light?

Copyright © August 2016 Lora Silvey

This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2016-09-13 23:31:47
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Night's magic lingers only with the help of a poet. The surreal imagery you provoke with your way with words have no comparison.

This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2016-09-03 11:48:00
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Beautifully described as always. As to your first question, yes I have while reading your poem. I have waved among the trees every time I read this work. I have made the trip a least five times. Tasting passions and being mesmerized moments can be addictive. As to last question, I would say it depends on who your with.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2016-08-31 15:01:16
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
My Dear Lady I don’t know whether it is Emily Dickenson’ish, or the mystical love of Ladyhawke, or the dragon love scene in Dragon Riders of Pern, or the spiritual integration in Avatar, or the most haunting moments in Anna Karenna, or whatever- I know it is a fabulous piece that touches every area of my appreciation. Of the linger or fade, the fact that you brought my senses alive in the recitation proves- the lingering. A very sensual poem that captures and caresses the sensibilities, of the physical manifestation from a spiritual inspiration. Excellent. I doubt anything will deter me from my selection this month. Maybe a great one by MSS will give you a run, but (don’t know how anti-epithet you are), Lora, DAMN! You have captured in an instant, what I so often have missed in the effort!
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