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Come Back. If I sent you enough poems to created a path, a way for you to sway your yourself gently my way again Each poem would be a stepping stone a worded map to guide to bring you home After all, each poem is born of you your smile your kiss your touch in your heated rush to my soul |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2016-11-23 09:27:06
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
I think you have written enough poems about this woman to have us all go looking for her. The poems like stones/guides to bring her back "home" reminded me of Hansel and Gretel in the woods. Makes me wonder if she on her way to the witch's candy house?
What I like most about your poems is that they are so simply worded.. so easy to read that one cannot resist being drifted into a dream.