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Quite A Bright Show
My breath stilled in quiet contemplation One hundred yards seemed like an inch as the sun gradually arose to a kinder shade of pink Cold air seemed distant precisely as the warmth of my view captivated and held me in its entirety The wonder of Winter never fails to mystify fill my mind with tender memories of Winter’s passed by changing this peaceful quiet to create brilliance like no other There off in the remote snow scattered grass stood the most becoming gathering of deer Beauty in the moment on this day will remain ever clear
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2016-11-23 09:46:02
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Excellently crafted words that gently hold the reader's hand and leads one into a magical winterland of breathtaking colors in the sky and the cool and peace of a more quiet time of year. I love the mention of the deer herd at the very end. There was already happiness in the view around and to see this gathering would have indeed brought a feeling of marvel of something more divine .. great surprise. If you really witnessed this, you are truly blessed. Love you!
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