This Poem was Submitted By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2016-11-30 13:06:01 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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When you Sang

When you sang to me  I found myself riding on  a winged unicorn And then joined the chase of clouds across the boundless blue with the winds and sun set hues rising and falling within  the ebb and tide of you

Copyright © November 2016 Joe Gustin


This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2016-12-02 14:04:57
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.87500
Joe a splendid read. I think such as this is more often defined by the reader than by the writer because of the universal theme and references. Of you personally, having read much of your work, I empathize with the feelings, adoration and metaphors/analogies. Of those metaphors/analogies, they easily catalog the heart of any reader, so inclined or not. Superb write! I particularly like the chase and wind- then the ending where ebb and tide are separated into their own universe, coexisting together!


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