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A Poem I want to write you a poem Something soft and quiet gentle and still like a sleeping tiger holding a quill I want to show you other worlds,so beautiful that you might wander away from the doubts of your own To show you a place where sun beams are ladders And the winds provide saddles for those who would dare ride the wilds of her whims Where every flower has perfect hearing Every stream,perfect pitch Every dream, flawless steering A satisfying scratch for every itch |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2016-12-27 10:49:37
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Some days are shit days and a poem like this
just goes to show how much love and beauty
there is in the world. To be cared for by someone
who would see every escape route out of that sad
moment .. to see through the nothingness, the
saddles of the wind.. just like flying away
on a magic carpet.
And the ultimate satisfaction - a scratch for every
itch.. You've captured it perfectly.
You put a smile on my face today. Hope your
Christmas was wonderful.