This Poem was Submitted By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2017-02-17 23:34:52 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!

Click Here To add this poem to your "Voting Possibilities" list!


Transending Celebration

Happy  to go 'round this circle of life as it continues to the end of time then everyone's last moment arrives the circle unbroken until demise breaks for a few moments to allow all to rise

Copyright © February 2017 DeniMari Z.

Additional Notes:
Hospital Dec. 2016 - Home health care through Jan. 12th, 2017 - Thought all was good until Feb. 7th - Yet again another diagnosis - TIA - times to the point of another inpatient stay and released yesterday Feb. 16th - after being scanned above the waist so many times - Restricted activity and no driving just yet - Please don't think I'm getting morbid - I'm not ready to pack those bags yet - not while this world gets more interesting by the day - I've just got to get a good hold on these health issues - and live well again -


This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2017-03-12 12:22:03
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
I am so sorry to hear of your health issues. Alarmed to hear of the TIA. I pray things get better for you soon. I was waiting for this site to make some format changes to help with the submissions and critique, as I'm sure others were, so apologies for not commenting earlier. Your poem is sad, needless to say. Your note explained everything. The circle is never really broken. Demise .. not now. PS What do you think of President Trump's hair? :P I love you dearly.


Poetry Contests Online at The Poetic Link

Click HERE to return to ThePoeticLink.com Database Page!