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Sun Slammin' White rising pheonix cloud, fresh green poppin' May leaves, cool loungin' chillin' love dude Tune blaster jammin' Frampton~ 'Do you~You~ feel like I do?' String bikini,lotion,and sun kickin'- late spring love rush ray drippin' Molten sundrops raining on my skin fiery passion tongue kisses Junk car flashin' like spun straw-gold- Rumpelstilskin's jumpin' up and down again in brittle rage envy Don't need your cruel black magic little man- Mother nature's got the most groovinest spells Slinky sun god worship ends me up with a slammin' tan- Don't want your bitter magic anymore midget man |
Additional Notes:
Ok ok,some of you are going~'Allrighty then~WHAT is this???'I like to read alot of different
styles and at this time I had been reading 'The Wheetsy Bat Books'(not sure of
the spelling)authored by a woman whose name eludes me at the moment.I was sunbathing
in my dads yard with my boyfriend (a.k.a. Love dude:))looking at this old junk
car of his(gold chrystler)mulling over a very irritating person in my life at the time.
So it was all in fun and I hope you'll let me know what you think~~Be honest!!:)I've purposely
used alot of slang and 'unwords' here.....
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