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ONE-TWO One two---what happened to you. Three four---your body lying on the floor. Five six---life gave you too many licks. Seven eight ---life could’ve been so great. Nine ten---you could’ve been up in heaven. One two three---why couldn’t you see. Four five six---you could’ve overcome all the licks. Seven eight nine ---you left you’re loved one’s behind. Ten again---you should be up in heaven. One two three four---Satan knocking on your door. Five six seven eight---you thought God and Heaven could wait. Nine and ten---you didn’t have to give in. One two three four five---you still could’ve been alive. Six seven eight nine ten---you gave in and let Satan win |
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