This Poem was Submitted By: carl a wertman On Date: 2001-02-08 00:27:52 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Slowly awakened, deliciously awakened by the faint aroma of our love playing lightly upon my senses, I spy lingering yet on our bedroom table last night's poems, which became in their time a gentile field of late summer breezes; Su Tung P'o had been compelling then,              but        you more so  as his lines became flesh.

Copyright © February 2001 carl a wertman

Additional Notes:
Su Tung P'o (1036-1101) is generally considered one of China's greatest poets; certainly one of my favorites.

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