This Poem was Submitted By: James McInnis On Date: 2001-03-13 18:59:48 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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The Fix

The quick fix The sly fox The chaste flirt With the multi-tasking tounge The walking contradiction The embodiment of temptation With the harshest kind of beaty The head of Madusa The body of Aphrodite Reptilian eyes that steal your soul You'll never escape her layer, the hole Serpent fingers that never let you free You've lost your mind, that's all you see

Copyright © March 2001 James McInnis

Additional Notes:
I made the mistake of showing this piece to the subject, she still wont talk to me. I figured punctuation would be a liability, no it is not a mistake, or at least it was intentional.

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