This Poem was Submitted By: Nathan Laughlin On Date: 2001-04-05 01:30:06 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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I can’t feel you’re pain. I can’t feel the hurt. I don’t know the words to say. How do you stay so sane? You’ve been treated like dirt. Maybe someone should pay. I look at the stars while looking for clues. And noticing the clouds, A thought comes to my head. I am in a deep muse. The reason for all the doubts. Why your heart seems so dead. You opened your heart, Felt only pain. Felt the betrayal. Love to you tastes tart. Love to you is being stuck in the rain. Love to you is being in jail. Now I’ve noticed a star poke through. All by it’s lonesome, It brightens the sky. Never has one had such a bright hue. It’s effect could be like that of rum. It could lift you to a never felt high. I am the star. I will push through the mist. I will be bright. The feelings of hurt won’t be missed. You will be taken to a new height. All you have to do is open your heart. Let it embrace you. Let it breath you. It will never from you part. It will keep these feelings as fresh as dew. This star one of few.

Copyright © April 2001 Nathan Laughlin


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