This Poem was Submitted By: Barry Lamar Phillips On Date: 2001-06-07 10:08:10 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!

Click Here To add this poem to your "Voting Possibilities" list!


Sacrifice on a Cloudy Afternoon

                  All in attendance stared in awe at her                   nakedness as she lay upon the altar poised                   to be sacrificed for the Tribal good                   thoughts raced through her brain at eighty-                   five miles per hour: "Did I take the laundry in?"                                        "Did I close all the windows?"                                        "The projection today is rain."

Copyright © June 2001 Barry Lamar Phillips


Sorry, there are no critiques for this poem in our system... If the poem is older, the critiques have been purged! Poetry Contests Online at The Poetic Link

Click HERE to return to ThePoeticLink.com Database Page!