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KISS Sleeping Watching you Dreaming eyelashes fluttering Softly against your skin Whispering And sighing Breathing so deeply Lips parted slightly sweetly Leaning Over you Listening for words Telling the secrets hidden Suddenly Reaching swiftly Grabbing with arms Hands mouth lips legs Pulling Me downward Falling onto you Your breath steals mine We kiss. |
Additional Notes:
I decided to make this piece a little bit more of a challenge for myself - each line contains one more word than the previous per stanza (except the closing line, of course). Originally, I was also going to try to maintain the same rhythm throughout, but found that was a bit more of a challenge than I am currently prepared to take on - hence the almost discordant beat. Perhaps next time, though.
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