This Poem was Submitted By: Peter Paschal On Date: 2001-07-04 20:42:25 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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You Can Call Me "Mellow Jello," Just Call Me!

it was more       than just my                peach-fuzz arms    or my thirsting tongue that captured you Oh, those       may have             awakened your appetite But it was nouns & pronouns             adjectives & expletives    that really reeled you in           close enough       so I could bind you to me              with corn-silk & ivy vines...   Soliloquies like,       "YOu're not JUST a gala apple,               or a luscious watermelon,    but passion fruit itself..."       passages that mesmerized                         and gravitized                      'till you spilled                           into                         my spoon     pacifying    me     completely                              completely

Copyright © July 2001 Peter Paschal

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