This Poem was Submitted By: Rene L Bennett On Date: 2001-10-11 14:14:56 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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This Brick Wall

One by one Through the years A wall was built With pain and tears. Brick by brick It was layed On solid ground Where it stayed. I tried to listen As you spoke to me Words of wisdom With prophecy. Yet, I could not hear Through this wall Built with strength As not to fall. Then one day From the sky I thought I heard an angel cry. Weeping softly Teardrops fell Gathered from life's Wishing well. Two more angels  Joined her side And hand in hand All three cried. Thunder bellowed Rain did fall Tearing down My sterdy wall. Yet, through the fog I found my way So, brick by brick I build today.

Copyright © October 2001 Rene L Bennett

Additional Notes:
For my family whom I love and deeply miss.


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