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An Inward Journey Blindly I walk in darkness for it's courage I truly seek Once again be my own person overcome the times I'm weak In the distance a shadow a silhouette in faded light An old woman boldly smiling she quickly vanishes from sight Suddenly I hear sweet music deep inside my very soul I found what I am after at last achieved my final goal The vision is clear to me my strength has been within My inward journey satisfied there is no battle I can't win. |
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I would like this poem not to be judged by the content alone but mostly by the metering. I am in the learning process and will welcome any input on this in an attempt to see if I am understanding correctly..thanks
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