This Poem was Submitted By: Rick Barnes On Date: 2002-01-16 16:07:46 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Things That Rust

All these lovely things I have, I've needed all along. I always keep them close to me, That's where my things belong. I've spent a lifetime gathering them, Doing what I must. And now my life is filled with things That break or die or rust.

Copyright © January 2002 Rick Barnes

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