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rictameter alone I stand betrayed once more to face the pain reality has strained my heart the fragments part and tumble to the floor my soul retreats again to hide somewhere inside...you're gone and I am left alone |
Additional Notes:
similiar to haiku...9 lines on non-rhyming verse, no punc., no title....lines one through 9 have this meter beat..2,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2..I used "..." in the second to the last line for effect, just applying a bit of poetic licence, and originality.
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