This Poem was Submitted By: Marcia McCaslin On Date: 2002-03-06 22:24:09 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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High Country Hiker

Seventy years young with her twenty-year-old smile, she hikes the high mountain trails. Plump fruit in her butt-pack will sustain her to hidden glacier lakes and back down by sunset. She knows this trail by heart, yet each time she sees it differently. She knows you have to be strong to withstand such beauty; otherwise, it will buckle you. She stops mid-day to eat her apple. A Blue Jay, or  Camp Robber, aptly nicknamed, has spotted her.   He has tree-hopped for several hundred yards, knowing her habit. He makes his play, swooping boldly to perch on her wrist to peck at the apple.  She's wise to him, but she leaves ample core behind for his treat. Paying homage to the lake, she looks longingly at the high ridges where once she reigned, where once even the thin oxygen was enough. On the way down the trail, she takes off her shirt, dips it in the rushing stream, and puts it on. She is refreshed and mindful of the simplest of comforts. At the end of her trail, she is sad. Like savoring the last page of a wonderful book, the page where the author owns you, the page where you savor each word, like precious seconds ticking down ...to the end

Copyright © March 2002 Marcia McCaslin

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This is revised to correct typos etc.


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