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Displaying Critiques 51 to 100 out of 347 Total Critiques.| Poem Title | Poet Name | Critique Given by Jordan Brendez Bandojo | Critique Date |
| The white magnet | Mark Andrew Hislop | Hi Mark, I am glad that you are back and so with MSS! I was so "magnetized" by your title "The white magnet". What came up in my mind is the word "Physics". We actually worked on magnets in our Physics subjects before. But the desciption of the magnet being "white" makes me wonder. There must be something here! So, let me read on...Yes, I can see your own trademark in writing. Originality and style you have them shown. Imageries, yes, abundantly crafted. I may not know the crux of your intent but what I'm sure I know of is you have made me salute to you poetic ingenuity. Jordan | 2006-05-15 22:50:25 |
| Reminiscences | April Rose Ochinang Claessens | Hi April, Wow! This one is another outstanding poem to note. This is heartfelt, heart-wrenching but so inspiring especially to the person whom you reminisce. The first stanza is very captivating and compelling and the like... My heart is filled with thoughts of you that I cannot put to words. I guess I have run out of words; my plume has ceased to perform. Should I take the final bow as my heart protests? It is simply inspiring! Here comes the entrance of Greek Mythology in the second stanza! Your forte! The Greek musician Orpheus is apptly associated! But the fear of being not there in the reunion is doleful and my heart is also pinched. I beg him with tears of blood that can melt the iceberg of the Arctic or even the heart of Hades. My bosom expands day after day with prayers that only my soul has the courage to whisper. So poetically writ! I am so amazed by writing as always! Keep them up! Jordan | 2006-05-13 17:51:54 |
| For The Love Of Aphrodite | Nancy Ann Hemsworth | Hi Nancy,
I just critiqued your "Musical Reeds" and it was a treat for me as this is! Oh, interesting that this one is a song lyric! I am wondering what music I can hear on this one. Anyway, your title is so captivating to both sexes. I for one would want to know how this Aphrodite came into being in your poem and how she makes a story to men. And I was afraid to take note of the imperatives, "Beware" "Take heed" "Don't listen" "Think hard" - I should be cautious myself then. Well, I am already married to an "Aphrodite" although still a young man (26) and can be lured by any Aphrodite. No no no! I got your cautions already! | 2006-05-13 17:37:57 |
| Downfall | Mary J Coffman | Hi there Mary, I have not recalled the last time that I critiqued your poem but I'm sure I did one before. Indeed, this is a reflection of your experience, innermost thoughts, and feelings. Sometimes, I also find it hard to communicate vocally and the best medium would be the paper. You will be somehow relieved when you express these tumultuous feelings inside. And good thing that you did it here. I like the influx of your expressions, you freed them without any hindrance, your words are footloose flowing. The abundant use of alliterations is remarkable. It somehow compensate the emotions. Thanks for sharing this with us and hope this "downfall" is gone now. Jordan | 2006-05-13 16:36:09 |
| Infinite Grace | marilyn terwilleger | Hi Marilyn, Most of your poems submitted lately give me a vernal feeling, full of life. Here, my fav expression is: "But when silence cheers and blesses all leas of moaning grasses, I’ll adore the moon, caress the dawn, frolic in rain and dampened lawn" I like the childlike countenance of the character in the poem, wandering and submitting herself unto God's infinite grace, no matter what! God bless you with more energy for your own and for the persons around you! Jordan | 2006-05-13 15:48:58 |
| Musical Reeds | Nancy Ann Hemsworth | Hi Nancy, Oh, I can feel the soft flutterings that create a melody in my ear! Music is really the best thing to know in harmony with nature. Reeds' rustle with silken stroke combing the night is wonderful! I would like to take a nap now as this poem lulls me. This is a treat for me. Thanks for sharing! Jordan | 2006-05-13 14:35:33 |
| Ideas | DeniMari Z. | Hi there DeniMari, First of all, thank you for posting again. It's been a while that I have not read your poetry. Now, I want to replenish the miss that I have. What I remember on your poems are definitely essentials to life just like this one. Your ideas are just brilliant and they are rooted from a deep understanding of the world. I like the beginning phrase, "swirl of my world begins", - a appreciate the originality, and the sound of 'w' gives me a waving water or an influx of ideas! Your question "Does my rank in life make me less important", is always my question that I could not get out my mind. Inferiority complex would sometimes hinder me from doing things. But here in TPL I can find home. That is why I stay although sometimes I struggle to find time. This piece really gives me the courage to be never afraid to express my ideas! Really love this one! Thank you! Jordan | 2006-05-12 22:11:27 |
| Rolling Thunder Medicine Man | Dellena Rovito | Hi Dellena, I was wondering why you hid "Shaman's Drum" because it was already perfect for me. Now I know the reason why! I can also see some finishing touches you applied to the body of the poem and this stands out PROUD! Bravo! Jordan | 2006-05-09 18:23:17 |
| The Child Within | marilyn terwilleger | Hi Marilyn, This is cute and has a very feminine countenance. With this poem, I can somehow see the personality of the author; mild and sober and full of dreams. Realizing the child within oneself is recognizing the nurturing of a mother and so putting God to be in the front. Your descriptions are just wonderful and so colorful and give us a picturesque visions. Thank you for sharing! Jordan PS...Congratulations on the your poem last month. This is a new beginning and a new challenge for us here in TPL. | 2006-05-08 15:47:02 |
| Alcohol Poisoning | Mike j Hoffman | Hi Mike, First of all, welcome to TPL. I did not recognize your name so you must be new here! Alcohol poisoning - yes everyone can relate to, myself was once poisoned. I can just recall the whole night I spent drinking with my friend and the sunshine greeted us already still we were not done! But that was the only time and it did not happen again. All your descriptions are true, I laughed at "answering to no one but the steadfast concrete floor". So true. Well, the write is good and the absence of meter, rhyming and the like is just apt to futher capture the theme. Thanks for sharing and I hope I can see more of your submissions here! Jordan | 2006-05-07 17:12:52 |
| High Road | Kenneth R. Patton | Hi there Ken,
Before the end of the voting period, I would like to say something on this although I may not understand your intent. This is actually the last poem that is left in my critiquing list for the month of April. The title "High Road" in itself suggests many intruiguing ideas. But what came up first in my mind is the idea of obstacles in life. You started the poem with a striking question. When I encounter this kind of high road I would probably...I don't know...just be with myself and call God for help. | 2006-05-07 16:42:51 |
| Pushing Envelops | James Edward Schanne | Hi James, I wish to give my input on this one before the end of the voting period. Although I may not get your intent correctly but let me dare. The title you have "Pushing Envelops" is striking, it can create a not-so-usual conceptions about the action verb on the noun "envelops" which is not common to appear in the title. It may suggest a letter or maybe a postman or something like that. So let me go on... What I can conceive in the first stanza is that you are talking about a certain job or work "shoulders whose burdens inspire dreams"... If it talks about a job, this job must be hard just like the task of a farmer. The imagery of the envelops raining down the cliffs is wonderful. Your second stanza contains some wonderfully artistic lines; "is there any ink left for sweets to draw" --- nice and this may be your trademark! Well, finishing the read leaves me wonder and I don't want to give a meaning on what is your intent. What I am satisfied of is use of unique descriptors, so much to be proud of! Write on! Jordan | 2006-05-06 22:22:04 |
| Portrait | Audrey R Donegan | Hi Audrey, I need to say something on this one before the voting ends. This is the first time I have read your poem although I found out that you have been submitting heresince 2005. Oh, you are 23, closer to my age 26! Glad to see you here. Anyway, this is so terse but so stong to describe the theme. I could not say anything but amazed how this works as a whole, firm and defined. Let me read some of your works submitted earlier. Thanks for sharing this one and I hope I can see more... Jordan | 2006-05-06 21:14:33 |
| Letter | Ronald D Istivan | Hi Ronald, A concise one but intriguing in a sense. As I understand, this one is experienced usually in teenage life where breakups and misunderstanding between sweethearts were "rampant" and I can relate to this one very well. I like the way you presented this; short, imperative and compelling! Write on. Jordan | 2006-05-06 16:19:50 |
| Awakened Spring | Nancy Ann Hemsworth | Hi there Nancy, I am glad to have stumbled at your poetry. So much in the energy on this one and I am fully awakened... I am fully awakened that... - it contains with so much wonderful imageries one can energize on (is my words apt?) - these imageries are abundant treasure in themselves - nice rhyming with ABBA all the way, creating a very nice sound when read aloud My favorite strophe is the third one: The crocus and the daffodil arise to lift their heads and greet a warming sun and sparrow's song, rings sweet that Spring's begun the perfection in God's work, before my eyes. Thank you for the energy this poems and more of this please! | 2006-05-05 21:30:31 |
| Night | Ronald D Istivan | Hi there Ronald, This is the second poem I have read from you and this one has an opposite tone. Your Period 6 is full of enthusiam but this one talks to the darkness part of life. This is short but it has everything it can tell. So compelling and poignant, "Never, not right now, no, never, not nothing, anyway.". This is a strong piece. Take care, Jordan | 2006-05-01 22:47:09 |
| A Sonnet | marilyn terwilleger | Hi there Marilyn, You know what? I am almost done with my critiquing! I have 7 poems left to critique and I am done! Did I answer your call to all critiquers? Just kidding! I am just excited that I am making myself active here, although my critiques do not contain helpful suggestions! So much for that, wow I congratulate your for this second completion of a sonnet. As for me, I feel it is hard thing to do but will try soon. I did not see any mistakes here except for the minor typo of "angels" in the fourth line. Everything seems to be fine, perfect rhyming, close syllabic count, etc. I am thinking of making a title of this one but nothing good popped out in my mind. Jordan | 2006-05-01 00:30:54 |
| My Husband"s Mother | marilyn terwilleger | Hi Marilyn, Thank you for sharing this with us. When we miss our beloved departed, we could not do anything than think of the memories they shared to us and it is so sad! I have a brother who died when I was still in my mom's womb and I think of memories we would have shared together. So sad! | 2006-04-30 21:39:46 |
| Eternal Void | April Rose Ochinang Claessens | Hi April, So nice of you to repost this and gave some finishing touches. This stands more strengthened and imposing posture. I can just bow on your poetic talent here. Greek Mythology, your forte! Nothing more I can say than... "Bravo"! I am thrilled to see more of your submissions here! Jordan | 2006-04-26 00:32:55 |
| My Reverie | marilyn terwilleger | Hi Marilyn, I think I have come across with this one before so let me savor its wonderfulness (is this the right word - wonderfulness?) again. Yes, I found this poem wonderful with the height of your reverie. Wonderful adjectives and descriptors are abounding! The twisting river in canyon’s bottom, the oxbowing of the snakes, boulders reaching for sky like blunt fists, and so on! So many wonderfull tangible images. I think this is what reverie is all about, huh! I can relate this to my poem "Trance" where I also have a lot of daydreaming. ,smile> Thank you very much for sharing this with us. Jordan | 2006-04-25 23:16:33 |
| Especially in Spring | Joanne M Uppendahl | Hi Auntie Joanne,
I have read this one but I did not critique it until it appeared on top of my critiquing list. So, let me "devour" this now! | 2006-04-25 17:47:35 |
| Soul in Need | Thomas H. Smihula | Hi Tom, This poem is so poignant! It's calling for help (SOS) and it impacted me so much. I mean I can think of the times in my life when I badly need of help but help is nowhere to find. This is more serious because it is the soul in need not physical thing. I am thinking of the soul almost invaded by the devil trying to be cleansed, trying to be footloose. The emotion you painted here is so felt by me and it is a success that way. Jordan | 2006-04-24 22:13:55 |
| Outgrowth | Dellena Rovito | Hi Dellena, This is a humble confession and submission of yourself. And I am wondering how you thought of this. I also consider this as a pledge to take care of the natural resources. Since you belong to this Earth, you are aware that your participation of preserving natural resources would greatly matter. The use of the metaphor "seedling" is simpely effective to start your story of being bron taking yourself as a plant. From being a seed, you travel the forest (I am smiling on the notion that you as a plant has feet to travel *smile* - I am taking it literally, just making fun of my mind). The Earth as nurturer is my Mother - yes, earth is a feminine symbol, just like a mother feeding her young! And Sun as your father is just apt knowing that the sun gives the sunlight to get some nutrients and chlorophyll (or whatever it is that make the plant grows). I really enjoy this writing and so jealous of you to have written this piece! More of them, please... Jordan | 2006-04-24 01:56:22 |
| The Pouch | Thomas H. Smihula | Hi Tom, I just enjoyed this wealthy piece of yours. If I were in your place having these grandchildren around, I feel the same joyous moments and I would have filled my pouch with all the gems to carry home. The use of these gemstones to describe the feeling is effective. Nothing to say more, I just experienced the lip-smacking dispersion. And how I wish I could physically experience this when I'm grown to be a Papa someday. Thank you for sharing this with us, Jordan | 2006-04-23 23:28:32 |
| One Night in Vegas | Michael Bird | Hi Michael, Good that you are just a looker on all these temptations in this joyous city of Vegas! I am not from US so but I could physically feel the place because of your concrete descriptions. I could imagine the pretty girls that you are describing, the crumbling of these hard men, the showgirls, callgirls, prostitutes, hookers, etc. I have no limousine, so no way for me to park my carabao-driver cart there and take a bite from Eve`s apple. Just kidding! I am afraid to feel the devil walking next to me so I'd rather stay here in my own little hut. By the way you got a typo with "ecstasy". Thanks for sharing this with us. Keep posting your poems, Jordan | 2006-04-23 23:13:13 |
| Listening | Kenneth R. Patton | Hi Ken, I am glad to stumble at your poetry once again. I am fortunate to know that the soul is the ultimate choreographer. Just realized this one and it made my own pondering. Yes, our brain could expound the physical meaning but the mystery of life is left to our soul to provide meaning. This is because God is the sole owner of our soul. Very very serious and very very vital thing to realize. Thank your very much for this realization, Ken. God bless you and your family, Jordan | 2006-04-23 21:47:05 |
| Waiting | Deborah L Bird | Hi Deb, Thanks for rewriting and sharing this with us again. Although I have not read the original "Watchful Eyes" but I appreciate your effort. This one is heart-wrenching and I can relate it very well as I have many cases before when I longed for a lover's caress but was not fulfilled. The first stanza effectively sets the tone of the poem. The desciption of "watchful eyes" is just apt to describe the tendency of waiting for someone. Yes, too much is the pain of absence as it has the tendency to prolong. Everything is just find in this piece except for the little typo of "desperately" in the third stanza but you were able to spelled it correctly at the last stanza. Hope you now found the lover's caress you are longing for or if not sooner I'm sure you will feel the real one. Thank you for sharing. Write on. Jordan | 2006-04-23 17:41:53 |
| Luna goes to bed… | Joanne M Uppendahl | Hi Auntie Joanne, This is a fresh submission and I am sure I am the first one to take a bite on this haiku! So, I hurried up and here I go...Reading the title alone gives this reader fantastic imageries. I am so jealous that I have not thought of this before! But only you, the Astrologer has the right title of it! LOL! This imagery is always observed in our province; raining, dancing branches, moon rising and going down. I just have a fantastic experience after reading this and I want to feel the moon reclining on me and together we sleep tight. LOL! Always, my face is glowing when I see your posting... Take care always! Jordan | 2006-04-22 22:02:54 |
| Period 6 | Ronald D Istivan | Hi Ronald, Nice to see you here in TPL as one of our new members. Welcome to TPL! Ooops, I should call you, Sir, as you are a music teacher, interesting to know! I just read the Period 6 and I this made me recall the things that I had during the younger schooldays with no care in the world. I am 26 right now and I missed the days that I have nothing to worry about, just going to the flow of what came my way. But in school I was always mindful of my grades as I don't want to be left behind the top students. Maybe the period that you described here is the early days of your scribing or the times that you write just to kill the time. You know, perhaps I learned to write poetry when I began to fall in love. I used to write letters/poems to those girls I courted before. Just excited to tell the remnants of my teenage days... Thank you for sharing this with us. And hope you share more of your pieces here. Jordan | 2006-04-22 17:59:08 |
| Preservation | Dellena Rovito | Hi Dellena, Once again you have given us things/lessons to ponder as your theme is always vital to human's life talking about attitude, behavior, all about life's preservation. I can feel your effort to make a rhythm and rhyming scheme and it is highly appreciated as you have done it all the way preserving the ABCB scheme. (smile). The opening of the first stanza is just striking. We crawl into the structure of our standards and burrow underground to heal our shame. This summarizes what the poem is all about and effective in that way. Just want to mention that the action verbs "crawl" and "burrow" gave the impact there... And there the preservation goes...I like the use of poultice to connote the idea and the simile is but simple yet striking. Everything else is intact in this piece and I have no suggestion for improvement. Write on. Jordan | 2006-04-22 17:19:56 |
| Vision of the Writer | James C. Horak | Hi James, Good to see your submission again. I have recalled critiquing your works long time ago about Canto's (If I am not mistaken). Anyways, this one is a realization of a poet. There is a sentiment you have presented in your "Vision of the Writer" that everyone can relate to. It is indeed true that when there is cloudiness there comes a brilliance in one's pen. Thank you for sharing once again. Jordan | 2006-04-22 16:20:09 |
| Lunar Clips | Joanne M Uppendahl | Hi Auntie Joanne, Very much, I enjoyed this clevely crafted haiku-style art of yours. It suggests me a playful and picturesque sceneries. I also like the reference of Chinese. Have you gone to China? Just asking! And I am smiling about the idea of the snobbish moon disappearing without a word. I remember Erzahl when it comes to haiku but you cleverly did it! Write on. Jordan | 2006-04-21 22:50:11 |
| Woman | April Rose Ochinang Claessens | Hi April, This one is so cleverly made. Woman, yes, everything is perfect on this concise piece. The Biblical reference is enough to describe the totality of a woman. I especially like the make-up of this idea, " Your womb has given life to the Light that freed the lambs from the Wolf's claws." Very well done, April. Another outstanding piece from you! Jordan | 2006-04-21 21:35:50 |
| Watermark | Dellena Rovito | Hi Dellena, Nice to have stumbled at your poetry again although I have not exactly recalled the last time I provided comments to your poetry. This one is brief but it brings up a big matter to discuss on. Watermark, intriguing title and it is artistic on its own. I like the way you present the idea of social awareness, tackling about how humanity behaves in a way that it creates a commonplace although sometimes, if we take a look at the other side, it appears to be negative. We do wish that the transformation of people will be for everybody's advantage, preserving our own rights. Forgive me if I have a shallow idea (I still consider myself as neophyte at poetry). The only small thing I have noticed is the unnecessary use of the apostrophe "'" like in "steamed cooker popping it's top" - no need for the apostrophe I suppose. Jordan | 2006-04-18 23:46:52 |
| The Utopist | Brandon Gene Petit | Hi Brandon, It's been a long time since I critiqued your poetry and I am glad to have stumbled on this. I was intrigued about the title and I can only think of the word "perfectionist" to connote the idea. And the word/or phrase "de ja’ vu" is new to me, of course, I searched for it. Anyways, you crafted this one with so much artistic lines like 'cream of winter dreams', 'chilled ambrosial stew', etc. And when I read this aloud, it makes a very good tone with all the alliterations and the like, it appears to be a song to me. More than anything else, this poem is a realization of what a person feel from season to season and good thing that there is hope in the mind to explore the graceful change. Thank you for sharing this with us! Jordan | 2006-04-18 00:26:53 |
| For All That Lives And Calls Earth Home | Joanne M Uppendahl | Hi Auntie Joanne, I was so excited to see your submission again. Thank you first of all for your zest in sharing your poetic talent with us. This one, as always expected from you, has everything to offer to complete your readers' satisfaction. The theme is most vital. It is a call to save our staggering Mother Earth. Although the theme is serious, you crafted this in a very artistic way. The idea of a "racoon" to emphasize the idea of Mother Earth is so unexpected and it left me amazed. Frogs performing long love songs...is so lovely! Yes, personification! This is one of the ingredients that makes the poem lively. All I can say is "Brava!" Jordan | 2006-04-17 23:58:44 |
| Vernal Season (Haiku) | Thomas H. Smihula | Hi there tom, Nice attempt to Haiku! I like the mood you are describing. I feel coolly. Needles bending into the wind is so fantastic. what I only notice here is the first stanza I think has only 4 syllables unless if you read "rustling" as three syllables. I can think of "whispering" but not sure if that will fit. Anyway, that is not a big deal! You have completed me with this one! Jordan | 2006-04-17 01:03:36 |
| Silence | marilyn terwilleger | Hi Marilyn, This is short but it's right to the point. And I wonder how this poem makes as a whole perfectly crafted in just few words. Silence could be so loud? Yes, in silence you can explore higher. You can deeply penetrate your mind in silence, it's like no interference at all. Tears connected to silence? Isn't it after the tears there is silence in your heart? I mean when you burst out everything through tears, like bursting out your feelings, you are relieved! I don't know if I am making a sense here of what I say! LOL...anyways, that's all in my mind... Peace, Jordan | 2006-04-17 00:31:50 |
| HIM | marilyn terwilleger | Hi there Marilyn, Me again! By the title, I know for sure who this poem talks about, I am so blessed to have read this poem because this is a reverence for HIM and this makes me realize that sometimes I forgot to recognize HIM. The times that I stood up on my own without recognizing that HE was the one doing it for me. Your descriptions are just apt to make this a humble piece of magnifying HIS greatness. Thank you for sharing this with us. God bless! Jordan | 2006-04-16 17:59:43 |
| Moonlit Night | marilyn terwilleger | Hi Marilyn, I just have a nice read on this one and it left me a smiling face. So much personification so that I feel alive. (got a slight fever and cold)...I will also be reposting my old works as I have no time to create one these days...kinda busy with my work and family. Take care... Jordan | 2006-04-15 16:25:56 |
| Venus on the Half Shell | Joanne M Uppendahl | Hi Auntie Joanne, I am glad to see your submission here. I always cherish to read your poems as I can see your heart speaking physically. This one is so inspiring, I can see the God/goddess of love alive, here. So much in the brevity of your art. So much to tell, so much to inspire, so much to live on.... Jordan | 2006-04-14 21:31:16 |
| Tattered Memories | marilyn terwilleger | Hi Marilyn, missed all of you here in TLP! this one is very inspiring! I love every idea you put in here. So much more with the "I love you" and "I love you too". I hope I can have more time to get in touch with you here at TLP, take care!! | 2006-04-09 22:24:09 |
| A Woman Combing | Thomas Edward Wright | Hi Tom, How much this poem touches my heart! I am in tears remembering my mom who is living at our province right now. It's been more than a year that I have not seen her. Your words and phrases here are just effective to make this reader long for my mother's embrace...This would be my best poem for this month! Jordan | 2006-01-12 09:24:04 |
| Second, First. | Mark Andrew Hislop | Hi Mark, I am not sure if this is my first time to comment on your poetry...This ranks high so I was driven to pick this for a read,,,hehehe,,,Your artistry has its own identity, I mean, the originality is high seen because you have your own way of putting your ideas together...I would love to read more of your incredible pieces. Jordan | 2006-01-04 11:27:34 |
| Leave-taking | stephen g skipper | Hi Stephen, I am glad to have encountered your poetry again. This one is tearful yet very inspiring. The assurance of love to your sweetheart is beyond measure. As always, you are profound with love and so much inspiration. Thanks for sharing this with us! Jordan | 2005-12-25 22:12:12 |
| Ingredients | Thomas H. Smihula | Hi Thomas, It is my pleasure to have read your poetry again. This one is short but full of essence in life. The way you depict the message is effective. You use concrete things for us visualize. Thanks for sharing, Tom. Regards, Jordan | 2005-12-25 21:32:05 |
| Time | DeniMari Z. | Hi DeniMari, This is cute but the line "Only minutes away from death" makes me feel sad. But this is a realization to all of us. Life is too short so we should live life to the fullest. How I wish we can live a thousand years! Thanks for making us realize the importance of time. Jordan | 2005-12-17 19:57:25 |
| 10:26 Revisited | Sandra J Kelley | Hi Sandra, I missed reading your poems. It's been a long time since your last submission and I was excited that I saw your submission. As always, I enjoyed your thoughts and inspiring lines. It made me reminisce the old days with my girlfriend, (now my wife). "The clock In the heart of town just Visible from the hilltop Proclaims 10:26.A time That has not changed in years." It must be the greatest event in your life. Super lovely! Thanks for sharing this with us! Jordan | 2005-12-17 19:25:46 |
| To Oakwood and Back | Thomas Edward Wright | Hi tew or tom? I miss reading your pieces and this one is sentimental. I read this line by line not realizing that it's a bit long but I had a good experience knowing the sturdy relationship and inspiration...thanks for sharing this with us! jordan | 2005-12-16 00:30:12 |
| A Night At The Ballet | stephen g skipper | Hi Stephen, It is nice to read once more of your inspiring poem. There is truly love that binds you and Paula. And I am pleased to keep track of the interesting things that you shared through your poems. This one is really reminiscing. I can imagine how you treat your dearest beloved. I must treat my wife with this kind soon. Hope to see more of this! Thank you for sharing this with us. Jordan | 2005-09-28 20:16:48 |
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