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♥ Moon Dance ♥ Twilight awakening, Piercing translucent glow, So serene. Steadfast companion, Keeper of secret dreams, Comforting mystic light. Ancient seductress, Silent siren’s song, Tending troubled souls. Flawless compass, Skirting gathering clouds, Trusty meandering course. Ageless embrace, Mute illumined grace, Everlastingly sublime. Cyclic nocturnal dance, Cosmic rhythms ever bound, Fulfillment absolute. ---C.G. McGovern-Bowen Westlake Village, June 2004 ©Carolyn Gale McGovern-Bowen 2004. All rights reserved. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Gerard A Geiger On Date: 2004-07-07 15:26:28
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.35714
Dear Carolyn;
Loved your treatment of the moon
as a smooth dancing partner...
an ancient seductress, flawless compass,
ageless embrace
everlastingly sublime...
What I really like most about this work,
is that you took the age old Moon...
the hero of love stories as a catalyst
for romance....and transformed it into
a decidedly feminine partner...dancing
its circular nocturnal way till morning...
quite new, unique and fulfilling...
enjoyed this work tremendously..
Thank you for submitting it to TPL
Best always,
Gerard