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Academian Nuts Think beyond the confines unraveling wall papered truth unseemly at the seams appeals judiciously while traveling up the supporters of notable reams filled volumes calculate tautology carousels of numerology add spinning sweet nothings in ontology canals wax to the beat of every fad book cases of indecision descend to the heads above noosed danglings lit bright paths flowing down the candle transcend where the avalanche of crushing thoughts hit bulging craniums of weight bearing studs are well washed by bubbling gaseous suds |
This Poem was Critiqued By: arnie s WACHMAN On Date: 2004-12-02 16:36:11
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.87500
Hmm. Don't know where you were going with this one. To be honest, I didn't like it. Why?
Because there were just too many big words ... tautology, ontology ...shouldn't that be
"oncology"?
Anyway, that's my take on it. Score me zero.