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Happy Birthday Deb
As you travel your new journey of life,may your candle always burn bright to show you the path, May your candle give you warmth and comfort. Know that you will always be loved and cherished in my heart. Know that any tears shed are those of happiness,now that you are free. Know that your presence and kindness towards others will be an example to be followed. Know that the memories of us together will always be cherished and bring a smile whenever I think of them. I won`t say goodbye,goodbye`s are all too final Somewhere,someday, out there in a distant galaxy our paths will cross again. So I bid you `adieu,and good journey. Peace and Light, Michael
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2008-01-07 10:50:54
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.75000
Michael, You have shown us a binding between two that will never be broken only the ends are distant and soon will be entwined again. Well presented and I like the format as well. You speak from the heart. Thank you for sharing your moment with us. Thomas
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