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Incompatibility Without the Flowers The first year she was gone I bought a skillet lined with teflon. She would bang on them with heavy metal spoons. This one is still like new... after 12 years. |
Additional Notes:
Many might argue well this rustic piece is not poetry. But to those it touches (and I suspect that may
even be of higher number) I insist it is.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2007-12-23 21:27:54
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
James,
I have to tell you, I really like this and yes it is poetry...How true a statement I've never heard..precise without mincing words. The end is clever and indeed once burden is removed things don't seem to get so mucked up...You've definitely put a smile on my face, good wit.
Best always,
Lora