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choice in the verbal aroma of sweet and zesty thoughts i'm the face of a single journey a companion in hungry prayers from my soul’s luminous windows zephyrs of potential pique subtly rustling through fields of my conversations arousing possibilities and sleeping pursuits always an unwilling passenger to board a conventional ‘cruise’ i opt for those undiscovered ports of call certain a chest of adventure lays waiting
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2008-04-03 17:24:13
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Terrye, A very enjoyable read, to sojourn the imagination in "I opt for those undiscovered poets of call" is such a fresh line...and to close with "certain a chest of adventure lays waiting" hopefully it is always there, sort of like the pot of gold, makes the sojourn so worth while. I've tried to find a nit with this but have not been able to so..definitely a winner.. Best always, Lora
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