This Poem was Submitted By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2008-12-15 22:51:12 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
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Pace of Grace In Life The grace of dawn;
Akin to Eden; ecstasy from creation;
Newfound time to wake; and
Embark on hours to satisfy; your soul
While sighs creep in to trouble
Daytime.............
Deadens the peace of morn;
Thick walls of life that block
Harmony in the pleasure of being
Sincere in your identity
Stills the spell of grace, creation
Fastens confusion
To where there should be celebration
Placid roads to follow
Pleasure to deaden the sighs
Break of day and days throughout
Ought leave us with no endless doubt
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Copyright © December 2008 DeniMari Z.
Additional Notes:
Strictly prose - thoughts of life; not perfection - just observation
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2009-01-06 16:36:51
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.85714
DeniMari,
"Strictly prose." Well, mostly. Yet . . . I like the depth of thought.
MSS
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2008-12-24 15:38:21
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
DeniMari,
If at dawn the peace of a new beginning start, and lasting a bit....there is hope
that grace will reach further and further into your day until it encompasses you.
No doubt things can grow to better.
Life is rough and all the bad influences make it worse,
but always with help we rise Above it.
God bless,
Dellena
This Poem was Critiqued By: Rene L Bennett On Date: 2008-12-19 03:12:49
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
I love your imagery. Very talented. This read (to me, anyway) as a solomn peaceful, well thought out piece. I love the stanza, Tp where there shouldbe celebration.....Placid roads to follow. Breathtaking!
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