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|Poem Title||Poet Name||Critique Given by Dellena Rovito||Critique Date|
|ME TOOOOOO||Ellen K Lewis||Ellen, I hrst you..... I do thr dame as you/ I love the link. It's a connection I'll not leave. I love James and his mind and kind heart. He's not just bull shit! Anyway on goes the anger in the world. I'm here tp be counted on. Dellena||2012-07-02 13:46:37|
|definition: I get what I deserve||Medard Louis Lefevre Jr.||Medard, Too long and drawn out. Could be more concise. Idea is good and heart felt though. Dellena||2012-06-07 19:05:56|
|Ticking Bomb||cheyenne smyth||cheyenne. Nice job and it feels real. Dellena||2012-06-07 19:00:13|
|I Was In the Middle and You Were All Around||Ellen K Lewis||Ellen, Your love endures... How great a gift you were given. And remember he's with you everywhere. Inside, in nature, in people. Just like my puppy howled like a wolf, [his ancestors were with him] I like the strength he gave and will always give you no matter what. Nice. Dellena||2012-05-21 19:59:44|
|Class Wars||Mark D. Kilburn||Mark, The end times will be 99% poor and 1% super rich. The truth will finally show. We haven not been free for hundreds of years. The latest time by the Rothchilds 1930 something. Jordan Maxwell - You are property of the Rothschild family! [youtube.com] Your right on with all you speak. Awareness people! Good job. Dellena||2012-04-29 14:55:34|
|The Unregarding||James C. Horak||JCH, Could the geist of their poem mean exactly their intent? Or could their eye opener be as a child? I've written lots of drivel dibble one day and thought it wonderful and the next day realized it's crap. It ain't easy to be brilliant all the time or even some of the time. We each have our pace. It can be tough to read at times. I'm saying it as I see it. You keep us all humping here....... Thanks for that! Dellena .||2012-04-29 14:35:33|
|New York||Mark Steven Scheffer||Mark, Is New York like China? I've been to NY. It has it's charm. I love Central Park that helps a lot. I think we'll be living in little holes in the wall and not much else. We are the slaves and thought us naught. ha! I liked your form. Your........ only asking one long question. Could end with a question mark, Mark. Have a good day young fellow. Dellena||2012-04-29 14:21:46|
|Sunrise Pink||Lora Silvey||Lora, It was a kick! As I began, I was thinking.... you wee\nt too far Lora. Too much for me to handle. What a hoot! You started my day great. We do need to smile more. Good for reminding me.... Wado, Dellena||2012-04-26 15:10:52|
|all fowl must die||Medard Louis Lefevre Jr.||Medard, All of everything must die, and our freedom the same goes. How sad to be had! But you got it. Suffer all the innocent. The poem isn't uplifting but it speaks truth. Dellena||2012-03-30 17:23:25|
|Taken (in between)||James C. Horak||JCH, A melancholy look at what was and could have been. The sham of some loves that tear at the soul. The flame in the wind that can easily blow out. The idea of what we want love to be doesn't or rarely does, fit the plan of mind. Most wanting to marry people wed at their right time instead of wedding the right one when or if he comes. Then no one is paired up to the right one. you have to find one you cannot, will not live without no matter what! That rarely happens. I went on a bit... And so we live alone. until. but it's only too late when we die. Just hang on for the ride. You are a remarkable man. Dellena||2012-03-30 16:14:36|
|sprouts||Ellen K Lewis||Ellen, What's good about your writing especially for me, is how you share your emotion. This is the objective of poetry we tend to lose sight of. "Nothing matters except she 's gone [friend, mother] concept." You write to tell of what matters to you. Good job my dear I love gardens and I'd eat whatever to live. Dellena||2012-03-30 15:43:23|
|Injustice||James C. Horak||James, A plop of dunk! I love my cat too but hate him chasing and catching a bird. I'm glad when he fails. He;s a very successful mouser though. cute poem, liked the rhyme and alliteration. Sorry, I can't pick on anything...... Good day! Dellena||2012-03-27 16:03:48|
|My Spirit||cheyenne smyth||Cheyenne, Love the Poe rhythm.... It moves so wonderfully. Love the rhyme, love the words, love the thought, love your work! Despite the storm which beat the prow and mast I couldnít help but breathe when my verse began [needs a 1 syllable revision] to wander on the page by light at last. Iíll seek calm of tempest seas if I can wonderful, wonderful and wonderful. Dellena||2012-03-20 17:18:52|
|voting day||Ellen K Lewis||Ellen, So tough it's been for you, my goodness. I'm so sorry to hear everyone left. Too difficult to face for them but how much much more for you. Nobody realizes 'enough' to do different. Writing helps a lot so do not stop. We need a reason to wake up each day. And that is where your strength comes in. Day upon day, pull the plow. eep on my dear, Dellena||2012-03-08 18:32:43|
|Time Travel||Mark Steven Scheffer||Mark, It feels so sad. A relationship lost. a shadow over the eyes. a failure. Everyone loses. Yet the good memories never change. They become nostalgic. It is so difficult to live through changes. I hate them. And wonder how I made it through. Break ups, deaths, heart aches illness all kinds of losses. It is hard to get past them but to an extent we do. And after a time we can see more objectively and understand what actually happened. So sorry life is tough today. Here is to the sun rising. I like your clear, write. It grabs and holds heart. Dellena||2012-03-06 15:26:30|
|full revolution||Ellen K Lewis||Ellen, This has a good feel to it. I feel the rhythm of life pulsing through it. I especially like the last stanza, of the old woman. It's all a day after another day moving through existence. Very nice Ellen. Dellena||2012-03-06 14:51:43|
|i woke up and read keats||Mark Steven Scheffer||Mark, With knowledge, things change. Unwanted or not you learn. We're suppose to grow no matter. The only real choices most times is how we respond. ontrol is a wonderful thing we possess so little of and yet we believe differently. Whose the puppet master. You're writing is always deep. Most don't want to think and face truths. good job, great imagery. dellena||2012-03-04 19:27:57|
|Communion||Mark Andrew Hislop||Mark, This is quite nice. It gives much room for thought. I first thought bible thumping, then myth came and then the dust. I believe in a supreme being but not in fairy tales. I question as we all do. love your works. dellena||2012-03-04 19:16:29|
|Undiscovered||cheyenne smyth||Cheyenne, You did quite remarkably for having nothing to say or to come forth. When I'm minus an inspiration of any sort , I'm like a dead fish. I think this is great and tells how frustrated one becomes. I"M WITH YOU THEIR> and always we try for one really good poem and when you think it your best, nobody agrees with you. So we keep trying...... Anymore I write for myself. It seems the only thing that works for me. Dang indolent pen. Some of the best works are to just let him go and flow. Wonderful job. Dellena||2012-02-25 18:51:46|
|Painterís Society||Lora Silvey||Lora, This says it how it is. I know Hitler was no more than a silver tongued patsy for the NWO. I'm not too knowledgeable of Stalin. But why do you suppose they want soooo much control? To abuse you, use you, and be rid of you at their whim. And who doesn't want a caring concerning father figure to keep us safe from harm? It is gagging. Democracy is no different than communism. We are a Republic! How easily the word Democracy popped up out of the blue. It sounds good. Loved your perfect examples. One rug, your house painted. [also tainted!] Wado Dellena||2012-02-25 18:36:08|
|Spell for Retrieving a Lover||Mark Andrew Hislop||Mark, You are inspirational. Do not think or move in words.... It is strange how much everything is in the context of that box. I'm going to try to write out side that box and see what flies out. I'm glad you still come here and share yourself. Your writings contain so much hope, [in youth]. Always an admirer of your works. They ring like bells of truth... I' m writing freely without deep examination... I'm begone. love it! Dellena||2012-02-20 17:35:30|
|Crappy days are here again||Howard D. Palmer||Howard, Sounds like a pretty catchy tune... I'm trying to remember the good ol days. They have all been directed to the now. We are actually comunistic rather than the Republic. And democracy sucks! Either party is bad semo or republican. So what to do to make changes? one can't do it alone. I wonder when the rich will pay? Crappy days are here to stay awhile. Hopefully we live through the depopulation party. Good writing. Dellena||2012-02-18 15:49:12|
|Seek Escape||cheyenne smyth||Cheyenne, I think you don't know........ that the ' apostrophe's have to be replaced when you submit a piece off microsoft word. Otherwise it looks as above. I believe that's the problem. and yet I just tested it on a word and it showed right. Hmmmmmmm what's the deal? Your poem is good. If you figure this out it will be good too. Dellena||2012-02-07 14:26:39|
|Under Your Spell (with correction)||Lora Silvey||Lora, Love the ending, it really adds something to the piece. Hope others notice and like it. yea........ Dellena||2012-02-04 16:56:21|
|The Pit Pony||Kay C Steward||Kay, a beautiful story. A wonder filled pony. Man's inhumanity to man is horror. And if they don't care for man, where does that leave our beast? Nowhere..... and our children? And everything else of beautiful and goodness. your poem helps fill a bit of the void. We as a people need flogging. A great write, I think. Full of heart! dellena||2012-02-03 18:47:02|
|Upon Rocks||James C. Horak||JCH, You sound momentarily fragile in this piece. Descent to the rocky filled abyss. Life is not boring for sure. As low is as high as we go. That is good, that is bad. i dare say, you are not often a middle roader.... Very emotion filled poem. But subtle. I like it. Y our friend of course, Dellena||2012-02-01 14:04:02|
|The Lagoon||cheyenne smyth||cheyenne, Another lovely of your many. You sound like the lady in lace. So utterly a women. I so enjoy your outright femininity. I pine for spring and all it brings. really nice job. Dellena||2012-01-31 14:29:09|
|Under Your Spell||Lora Silvey||Lora...... If only you cut off before the very last word. one would be left hanging, wondering. Did she ? it just flowed along so well, an abrupt end w ou ld have stopped you in your tracks. That's my take. Lovely, smoldering. sounds like something's hot not cold anymore. good for you. Hubba hubba ding ding, dellena||2012-01-31 14:22:40|
|Money Train||DeniMari Z.||Deni, Money is tough. just to exist is hard. But with a lot of work, we can get through. Start hoarding food. Cut expenses, watch for waste, buy only necessary. i've found in my life there 's ups and downs throughout. it actually is more fun to be challenged. When I have it, people do anything to get it from you. When you don't they basically leave you alone. That's the trade off. Your poem is clean, pure and pretty good. dellena||2012-01-31 14:14:45|
|Not a poem DON'T VOTE ON THIS||James C. Horak||James, The only counter to this is: I as a poet, write for myself. It helps me see myself and is therefore usually a valuable tool that would NEVER mess up my life only enhance it for being able to view life differently. TS Elliot is full of poo. I need never question if my time were wasted. ever, even if I were a bad writer. Dellena||2012-01-21 14:32:14|
|On Our Way||DeniMari Z.||Deni, This leaves soooooo much you can imagine. I like it a lot. I need to do as this. I think this is one of your best! You captured an emotion onto paper and it sailed. How great is that! Dellena||2012-01-21 14:04:19|
|Carving Words||cheyenne smyth||cheyenne, Collecting driftwood from the silent shore You carve your words in every cut with care Beyond the thoughts that shake my [the] very core Between nowhere and everywhere I[to] dare To steal your heart from those who sunder [I hate sunder] me [try to get out of the poem] When all the songs we sing a poem springs Iíll [to or we'll] read aloud a verse that sets you [one] free Untie the thread around your heart with strings Iíll [shall] take your quill but never will try to [I'd put to on next line] Erase my love from its soft[don't need nor want] resting place Where I [one] can hold your hand and cherish you Then brush your brow and kiss your handsome [use a better word] face Iím [whose]not bewildered by your [the] words today [you say] So carve upon my [the] soul an ode I pray Anyway I went a bit wild and probably shouldn't but it seemed to cry for help. I most always love your every word but this one failed me. I wished it didn't. darn, Dellena||2012-01-21 13:58:45|
|Cold (ageís shimmer)||Lora Silvey||Lora, So nice to read your work! Sounds cold over in your neck of the woods. you write as I about yourself so....... Sometimes it feels so cold, it [I] just [cannot] wonít warm a heartless cold that will not let me move-- as the living Iíve known are laying ashen and all else becomes crumpled dust Cold, the kind that steals your [my or the] breath, silencing heartbeats, freezing every thought so [no 'so'] hands can no longer button or tie knots just as feet now move only to [a] wavering gate Just my thought ....but who am I to tell you? You do so well. Dellena||2012-01-20 17:53:21|
|On a Piano Bench in Sunlight||Mark Steven Scheffer||Mark, I don't know why, nor does it matter that I do....... but you filled my cup to over flowing. I am so very pleased with you! I feel so much has happened or changed or that you finally 'show' it is cause for a rainbow to come. I would be so glad to sit on the bench in the sun with YOU. Dellena||2012-01-19 19:52:27|
|My Mother's Secret||Mandie J Overocker||Mandie, This is so nakedly stark, sad and maybe true! it shows terrible anguish and pain. It seems as if a soul is crying out for mercy from the suffering. The rhyming is very effective. It sets me back a pace or two. pondering this... So very sad. I think the intent was this. And if so well done! Dellena||2012-01-03 15:09:40|
|Australian Trees in Winter||Kay C Steward||Kay, Lovely, different area for me. I liked willy nilly.... good job. In the breadth of the trees Wild westerly's - West wind howling throughout the night Pale morning brings surcease. [I'd like the end better] Happy NY dellena||2011-12-31 16:25:11|
|Puppet||cheyenne smyth||cheyenne, You dance because you wish to. Y ou don't dance when you don't want to. Freedom to express is actually yours now. I understand the desire to please. But it all lies in your hands. The more independent of thought and confidence, the more he will want to be with you. believe it or not. Y our super, dellena||2011-12-31 16:11:03|
|The Newness of You||Kimberly D Rowe-Van Allen||Kimberly, Good ideas, here's a few different thoughts. Hopefully you don't mind. Feeling loose and free When you share with me The funny, the mundane and true Since [we've] met I just can't stop smiling you aren't repeating 'you' Beguiling [is] the newness of you Passionate Playful Abandon Soft kiss from the lover of blue could do better than [blue] needs different I long to peel back your layers Craving the newness of you Sexy Soulful Soliloquy [tongue tying] Shared your heart at the start All of you something better needed An incredible connection from inception tongue tying and maybe split it up with above line? I love the newness of you I'm a bit jealous of your wonderful new beau. Dellena||2011-12-31 16:04:48|
|I'm Dying Inside||Mandie J Overocker||Mandie, think about this...... bittersweet lachrymal drops in her eyes threaten to fall betraying the lies she swallows the knot in her throat as she tries to hide the fact she‚Äôs the one who now crying from rhyming each line expecting the same you finish fresh. same with the other stanzas. I like your idea but the rhyme gets boring. Hope you consider the change maybe? Happy NY. delllena||2011-12-31 15:44:55|
|Faith||Kay C Steward||Kay, This is good and starkly true and always desperately wanted and needed. You said it all. May the holiday magic come to you. Dellena||2011-12-24 17:38:46|
|Bleeding Sheep||David Keesey||David, This sounds like a bad day in the barnyard! I hope it turns to better for the holidays. I know at times I wish another would shut the .... up. I even bought a glass cup reading Have a big cup of shut the .... up! Your poem teeters me on the edge. Speak up or shut up. Speaking up can prove to be my downfall. Dellena||2011-12-24 17:32:42|
|Sunshine In Our Hearts||DeniMari Z.||Deni, This is intriguing! It says much to ponder. It has simplicity, I like and yet very much depth. It rhymes nice at the ending. You did a very good job here. Happy Christmas my dear. Dellena||2011-12-24 17:27:05|
|The Tea Trade||Mark Andrew Hislop||Mark, I'm so thrilled to see from your dedication, that your friend means so very much to you. The writing was absolutely lovely, life affirming showing the interconnection to each other brings out the whole of you. The tea idea was brilliant! Happy Holidays young man... Dellena||2011-12-24 16:59:18|
|I Once Was Lost||Latorial D. Faison||Latorial, Very humble and emotional writing. Glad to see your work again. From a lost sheep to another, I love the goodness of God and wish to also live in the light in peace. Hopefully our world will vie for betterment also. Dellena||2011-12-04 17:52:39|
|To My Reader||Mark Steven Scheffer||Mark, You speak true. Love and caring are all that matters. Touching another with your words, is a great way to connect. I like this thought and you expressed it well. I feel I understand you better....... Dellena||2011-11-27 15:44:54|
|Prayer to the Beloved Enemy||Joanne M Uppendahl||Joanne, This is quite lovely and doubly true. It is a prayer of humility and lifts spirits up to see........... You say it how you experience it. The spirit is everything that matters. There is no comparable. You did a Great job here. You took me there in words. What is better than that? Dellena||2011-11-26 14:18:18|
|Touch my Soul||cheyenne smyth||Cheyenne, I like it all but......the dear drops! Even if the count is off it would be better gone. Or replaced .... Dear seems not descriptive enough. I love your writings always, but that word just didn't set. Dellena||2011-11-26 14:08:38|
|Eleven, Eleven, Eleven||Kenneth R. Patton||Kenneth, If people didn't want war they wouldn't support it. And people keep paying the cost of war, by paying their taxes! The soldier was duped into the idealistic thought they were fighting for freedom. While all the time they were fighting for gold, oil, power and basically greed at it's finest. We need to stop all this useless genocide. "We're all going down if this keeps up" Expressive, sincere, and meaningful write. Your rhyme subtle. good job. Not sure what 11 11 11 means, date for.........? Dellena||2011-11-20 19:20:12|
|Twenty Years||cheyenne smyth||Cheyenne, Lovely writing. Magic touch of vocabulary. I find things run in twenties. married 20 years/then parted, 20 years to raise a child, the change of life drama..... all as if the 20 years was time for something different. Tried it/do different. Thoughtful, poignant, well written. Dellena||2011-11-20 19:05:57|
|Feeding on Innocence||James C. Horak||James, How horrible to justify the priesthoods :mistakes" with children and call it natural. The christian word would help them heal! Like hell it will! The pope must be wearing a mask and it slipped off a bit to show who he really is. hmmmmmmmm You spread the word and get us thinking. Great work James. Dellena||2011-11-20 18:57:53|
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