This Poem was Submitted By: Michael Bird On Date: 2010-03-14 17:29:35 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Hashing `Round the World

hashing we will go in wind,rain or snow through valleys,across creeks the beer near is what we seek   tunnels,rivers,sewers nothing can be newer hashing here ,there, and everywhere sun and wind in your hair   woods,fields,streets you never know what you`ll find sand,snow,rain,sleet every time that we meet   hashing here,hashing there hash more,hash less that 100th hash you`ll freeze your ass   been hashes since `38 the more you hash the more you rate don`t ever be late   on-on! ,on-after! whistles,flashlights back checks,swing checks catch the hare `ifn you run faster   hares,hounds,the pack daylight,midnight red dress run oh,what a sight!   you can hash round the world have fun,have a run hash,hash,hash always on the run      

Copyright © March 2010 Michael Bird

Additional Notes:
A tribute to hashers the world over-Second Hander here-ON-ON!

This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2010-03-30 15:52:18
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
A nice look into something I knew nothing about. I knew hashing algorithms, but not the communal rabbit, run and beer. The research has opened up a new enlightenment for me. Thanks for the leg up!

This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2010-03-24 13:03:11
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Michael, I hear the tune of the Christmas song, Over the rivers and through the woods to Grandmothers house we go, it's the style in which it is written that brought that to minding. Hashing, a unique word. What exactly is hash? A lot of words come to mind - like, marching, going, forging on, and others. It seems a bit forced in certain stanzas, as if you had exactly in mind what you wanted to say, but put words in that sort of stopped the flow of the read. It definitely speaks volumes of a chaotic world, as in running, a pace too fast that some are living, always on the go and never taking time to stop and find peace. I'd suggest some changes in order to make this a more outstanding post, but who am I, just another unprofessional writer, doing what my passion in life seems to be, expression through written words. blessings, Deni
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