This Poem was Submitted By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2011-04-25 20:19:28 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Last year and since forgotten the lilac bush came abloom  today  brief again will be it's encounter Purple colored memories flood back an imperial aura filling the senses How sweet it's Lilac breath with exquisite emit it's floral scent  One wishes to linger in the fragrance  and cling to it's imbued pleasure       To pick a bouquet and vase display the purple clustered flowers will chase  the gray of spring rained days away 

Copyright © April 2011 Dellena Rovito

This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2011-05-07 10:48:32
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Dellena, as I said before- the title is remarkable to the piece. I like what you have done in the rewrite. It is so well done it appears almost as a different poem. Bravo!

This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2011-04-27 21:21:24
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Dellena, Your love of nature and sinking deep in to it stand out in this poem. My favorite line in your poem is: How sweet it's Lilac breath with exquisite emit it's floral scent the imagery is outstanding and thought provoking to envision a Lilac scent breathing out the sweet smell they produce. From beginning to end this poem captured me, took me away to a beautiful place and will do the same for others. The ending caps off the message and also stands out accordingly. I love this Dellena, well done, and on my list, blessings, Deni
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2011-04-27 17:49:27
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Nicely done Dellena, great descriptive words that paint pleasant images to mind. With your easy flow of words and smooth lines your reader not only can invision your florals but also begins to sample their fragrance. A most enjoyable read...Lora
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