This Poem was Submitted By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2011-06-20 17:48:53 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Music of the Universe

If melodies touched heaven souls would dance and sing words of "glory to"  would absolutely ring  Wonder in our world grandeur most precious sun splendor to life's energy        may beauty reign for everyone      May the love for others rule     our complex tortured minds could we have a nectar for peace  as sweet a blissful wine? 

Copyright © June 2011 Dellena Rovito

This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2011-07-03 14:11:45
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Dellena, to breathe is the necessity of living, the “nectar of peace” is the moments of hope. Being a lover of great melody, the sound and the metaphor- there is much hope for those who will dance, unpretentiously, to melodies that make a difference. The divergent views cause each melody to be interpreted, rather than inhaled. It hinders us. The nature of beauty, for me- is something I adhere to each day. Many can’t see the world and haven’t a clue what beauty is. No, beauty is not a pretty face, washboard abs, or a nice set of knockers- that is the “complex tortured minds” that haven’t a clue. When I go to work in the dark, every morning, I hear the complex song of nightingales, often see the moon setting in the distance- and smell the freshness of the night air- Peace, or active peace, must be like that; “sweet and blissful wine”

This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2011-06-27 23:29:16
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Very uplifting Dellena - I've noticed a trend towards a lot of spiritual posts lately - and I consider this to be one of the nicest ones I've read. All of it is precise in poetic form, the message is clear and beautiful - it's like a lovely song in itself, for those that seek to find peace here on earth - amidst daily adversities. On my list, blessings, Deni
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