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Time Travel a light snow fell. we remembered other snow falls, and the children at younger ages, and a hand lay its shadow on your eyes. i had failed you as i failed everything. but at this moment you didn't care; i didn't fail. the snow was a sacrament, and everything was pure, holy. something incomplete was finished, and there was nothing left to say. the windowpane was frosted, but the future lost its edge: we had been there today. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2012-03-07 13:14:29
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Lovely...and I mean that. "the snow was a sacrament" to the mind in the recollection with dear ones, a perfect
way to bring the reader into your moment. JCH